Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Through the tunnel

SETTING OF THE STORY
The story took place in summer holiday at the beach.

PLOT:
First day of the holiday the young english boy and his mother went to the beach. At the turning of the path he he look down at  a wild and rocky bay. While playing at the safe and crowed beach he could not stop thinking about the wild bay. On the edge of a small cape away from promontory waslose scatter rocks. There were boys stripping to start diving , to Jerry they were man. Jerry decided to join them, doing what they were doing. Although language was a barrier, hge manage to get close to them, and join them in diving and swimming. The boys were diving into water caming out the other side. Jerry took that as a challenge and wanted to prove himself that he can swim through the tunnel. He convince his mother to buy him goggles which he needed to swim through the tunnel. The day before they left for home he went to attempt the challenge. he prepared himself and dive into the water, he swim through tthe tunnel. Although his nose was bleeding and was in extreme pain, Jerry prove himself.

Main Character
Jerry is a 11 year old english boy with a alot of confidence. He had to converse with himself, about this own capabilities. He had the courge to achieve what he thought he could not do it. He had to fight against the current to to make it through the the tunnel.